What do you do you think is the most effective way to improve ourselves?
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Hi, Yeong^^
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I think the most effective way to improve ourselves is finding problem and solve the problem myself or have help from other people.
>> I think the most effective way to improve ourselves is to find the problem and solve it immediately or ask help from other people if you need it. .
Sometimes people lives by mistake. Some people are knowing their mistake and problem however there aren’t people.
>> Sometimes people lives by their mistake. Some people they know their mistakes and problems however they are not doing anything to solve it.
Therefore we have to check our something mistake and fix after then we can consistently improve any type trouble in our life.
>> Therefore, we have to check our mistakes and fix after that we can consistently improve any type trouble in our life.
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