What do you drink for breakfast/ lunch/ dinner?
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ESSAY QUESTION: What do you drink for breakfast/ lunch/ dinner?
When we have a meal, we usually drink barley tea or corn tea, which are the most popular teas in Korea.
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or>>During our meals, we often have it with some barley tea or corn tea. These are the most well liked teas here in Korea.
Most Koreans like to drink those teas with meal since this custom inherited from long time ago.
>>Most Koreans like to drink these teas with their meals, since this custom was inherited from our ancestors a long time ago.
I also like to drink these kinds of teas whenever I have breakfast, lunch and dinner.
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or>>It is the same for me, I enjoy having these teas with my breakfast, lunch and dinner.
But I used to drink beer or other alcoholic drinks made by special material at lunch and dinner time.
>>But I used to drink beer or other alcoholic drinks made with special ingredients during lunch and dinner time.
Among them, I prefer beer to other beverage.
>>Among these drinks, I prefer beer to the other beverages.
Especially, it is always fantastic when I drink beer with meal in hot day,
>>Especially, it is always fantastic when I drink some beer with my meal during a hot day.
And also beer itself is good after hard work or exercise.
>>And also, having a beer by itself is good after a hard work or an exercise.
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