What do you drink for breakfast/ lunch/ dinner?

Hi Teacher Elly The title above of today's homework is same as that registered on 10th of May. we told about my last travel to japan in this morning clss. But I gave a wrong information about the name of one japanese city that I visited this time. The correct name is Karuizawa not Karuzawa. Sorry for my mistake. Anyawy, Karuizawa city is one of very attractive cities in Japan. It is true that Karuizawa is the city that I want to visit whenever I go to Japan due to its fantastic natural environment. Nowadays, I became to have a concern about the city of Baguio(?) in Philippine even though I heard the city name first from you. I'd like to collect an informtion about the city. And then, I hope to talk about the city in detail with you. Thank you.

Hi Dr. [이름]!

Thank you so much for your note!

I appreciate it a lot!

For sure, for sure we can discuss more about the topic in the class.

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

ESSAY QUESTION: What do you drink for breakfast/ lunch/ dinner?

Hi Teacher Elly,

The title above of today\'s homework is same as that registered on 10th of May.

>>The title above in today\'s homework is the same as that registered on the 10th of May.

we told about my last travel to japan in this morning clss.

>>We talked about my last travel, to Japan - in the class this morning.

But I gave a wrong information about the name of one japanese city that I visited this time.

>>But I gave the wrong information about the name of one of the Japanese cities that I visited last time.

The correct name is Karuizawa, not Karuzawa.

CORRECT!

or>>It should be Karuizawa, and not Karuzawa.

Sorry for my mistake.

CORRECT!

or>>I apologize for the wrong information.

Anyawy, Karuizawa city is one of very attractive cities in Japan.

>>Anyway, Karuizawa city is one of the very attractive cities in Japan.

It is true that Karuizawa is the city that I want to visit, whenever I go to Japan, due to its fantastic natural environment.

CORRECT!

or>>It is a fact that I usually like going to Karuizawa city whenever I go to Japan, because of its splendid natural environment.

Nowadays, I became to have a concern about the city of Baguio(?) in Philippine

>>Nowadays, I came to have some concerns about the city of Baguio, in the Philippines.

even though I heard the city name first from you.

>>Even though, I heard the city’s name first from you.

I\'d like to collect an informtion about the city.

>>I\'d like to get some more information from you about the city.

And then, I hope to talk about the city in detail with you. Thank you. 

CORRECT!

or>>And then, I would like for us to talk more about the city in the class. Thank you.