What do you eat when you feel sad
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I think I eat something sweet when I feel sad.
But when I really depressed or I spend terrible time, I often drink alcohol.
And then I feel better and I got an energy that I move forward.
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I think I eat something sweet when I feel sad.
>> correct!
But when I really depressed or I spend terrible time, I often drink alcohol.
>> But when I really feel depressed or when I have a terrible time, I often drink alcohol.
And then I feel better and I got an energy that I move forward.
>> And then I feel better because I start to have energy to move forward.
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