What do you eat when you sad?

2021-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I eat sweet or spicy foods when my emotion is not good. I think sweet foods have effect that makes me calm down and spicy foods make my stress relieve. But I prefer to eat sweet foods more than spicy foods.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I eat sweet or spicy foods when my emotion is not good. 

>> I eat sweet or spicy foods whenever my emotion is not good. 

I think sweet foods have effect that makes me calm down and spicy foods make my stress relieve. 

>> I think sweet foods have an effect that makes me calm and spicy foods relieves my stress. 

But I prefer to eat sweet foods more than spicy foods.

>> CORRECT!


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