What do you enjoy about your job?
학생이 쓴 원문
I enjoy drawing by my hand.
I feel happy when I get a garment which I designed and if it is made nicer than I expect.
I feel happy when my colleagues and boss like my clothes and when I face someone with my design on the street.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Yu [이름]. I appreciate you doing your homework. I believe it will help improve your English skills more. It would be my pleasure to give you my feedback. So here goes.
I enjoy drawing by my hand.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> CORRECT!
I feel happy when my colleagues and boss like my clothes and when I face someone with my design on the street.
>>> I feel happy when my colleagues and boss like my designs and when I see someone wearing my design on the street.
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