What do you enjoy doing in the park?

2020-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually enjoy going to starbucks in the park for drinking coffee with my honey. We can many talking in that place due to mood. There is always crowed with people and is no need to be noticed. So I like that place. And I think it looks relaxed. I used to go to starbucks once a week with my honey or my mom before. But since coronavirus revealed, I haven\'t gone there. I hope goes by this virus. Everybody hope, too.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. I am hoping for it too.

- T. Beth

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I usually enjoy going to starbucks in the park for drinking coffee with my honey.

>>> OR: I usually enjoy going to Starbucks in the park to drink coffee with my honey.
We can many talking in that place due to mood.

>>> We can talk a lot about many things in that place due to the mood.
There is always crowed with people and is no need to be noticed.

>>> It is always crowed with people and you won\'t be noticed.

So I like that place.

>>> correct
And I think it looks relaxed.

>>> correct
I used to go to starbucks once a week with my honey or my mom before.

>>> correct (I used to go to Starbucks once a week with my honey or my mom before.)

But since coronavirus revealed, I haven\'t gone there.

>>> But since coronavirus appeared, I haven\'t been there.

I hope goes by this virus.

>>> I hope this virus will soon disappear.

Everybody hope, too.

>>> Everybody is hoping for it too.

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