what do you enjoy doing on family gatherings?
학생이 쓴 원문
My families and I have delicious dishes together.
It\'s mostly made by my mother.
Sometimes We go out to enjoy seeing around good sceneries.
We enjoy having a aroma coffee or eating out.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [Name]!
My families and I have delicious dishes together.
>>> correct
It\'s mostly made by my mother.
It\'s mostly made by my mother.
>>> correct
Sometimes We go out to enjoy seeing around good sceneries.
Sometimes We go out to enjoy seeing around good sceneries.
>>> OR: Sometimes, we go out to enjoy sight seeing.
We enjoy having a aroma coffee or eating out.
>>> We enjoy having aromatic coffee or eating out.
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