What do you enjoy most about autumn?
학생이 쓴 원문
I go hiking and driving in nature. It\'s a great time to enjoy fall, with the beautiful colors and cool weather.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]~^^
That sounds wonderful! Fall truly is a magical time for outdoor activities. It is also my wish to enjoy the stunning scenic views of autumn.
~Kelly^^
I go hiking and driving in nature. >> Correct
OR:
>> I enjoy hiking and taking scenic drives in nature.
It\'s a great time to enjoy fall, with the beautiful colors and cool weather.
>> Correct
Fall is the perfect time to experience the beautiful colors and refreshing cool weather.
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