What do you enjoy most about meeting your family during the holidays?
학생이 쓴 원문
my family do faming or go fishing,hiking and play Hwatu(Korean card game).
we love to play together and it is so fun.
It makes me really happy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! It sounds like you have a lot of fun with your family! I can see why it makes you so happy.
~T. Jewel
my family do faming or go fishing,hiking and play Hwatu(Korean card game).
>>My family does farming, fishing, hiking, and playing Hwatu (a Korean card game).
OR
>>My family spends time farming, fishing, hiking, or playing Hwatu (a Korean card game).
we love to play together and it is so fun.
>>My family spends time farming, fishing, hiking, or playing Hwatu (a Korean card game).
we love to play together and it is so fun.
>>We love playing together, and it’s so much fun.
It makes me really happy.
It makes me really happy.
>>CORRECT
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