What do you enjoy most about your job?
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you enjoy most about your job?
Actually, I don’t know whether I like my job or not.
I work in this company , since 2022.
I’m interested in using programs.
But, I sometimes used to pack the materials when my coworkers are busy.
At first, I thought that the materials are just product. But I acquired that It is a life for someone.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Stella! I hope you could find happiness in your job! ^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
Actually, I don’t know whether I like my job or not.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>Honestly, I’m not sure if I like my job.
I work in this company , since 2022.
I work in this company , since 2022.
>>I have worked at this company since 2022.
I’m interested in using programs.
I’m interested in using programs.
>>I’m interested in using different programs.
But, I sometimes used to pack the materials when my coworkers are busy.
But, I sometimes used to pack the materials when my coworkers are busy.
>>But sometimes I would pack the materials when my coworkers were busy.
At first, I thought that the materials are just product.
At first, I thought that the materials are just product.
>>At first, I thought the materials are just products.
But I acquired that It is a life for someone.
>>But I realized that they are a livelihood for someone.
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