what do you enjoy the most about being a housewife?
학생이 쓴 원문
First,I often fell really happy and I can have a lot of free time also I like to stay at home and going out too.
I think I have been worked for 25years old so hadly. I am enjoying my time these days
I love who I am now.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! I am glad you are having a great time being a housewife now. Thank you for sharing your ideas. Have a great day!^^
~T. Jewel
First,I often fell really happy and I can have a lot of free time
>>I often feel really happy, and I have a lot of free time.
also I like to stay at home and going out too.
>>I enjoy staying at home as well as going out.
I think I have been worked for 25years old so hadly.
I think I have been worked for 25years old so hadly.
>>I think I have been working hard since I was 25 years old.
I am enjoying my time these days
>>So, I’m enjoying my time these days.
OR
>>So, I\'m having a great time these days.
I love who I am now.
>>CORRECT
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