What do you enjoy the most about camping? (having conversation, seeing nature, eating, etc.)

2025-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I enjoy everything First, I set up a tent, table and chairs. and I go for a walk around there to see nature. I start cooking when sun begin to set. I have conversation while enjoy food and beer. Finally, I like to see stars in the sky. I love everything about camping.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Bi,

Thank you for submitting your essay.

I really appreciate it and you also did well in describing the thing you like the most about camping. ^^

~ Teacher Gina

I enjoy everything.

>> CORRECT.

First, I set up a tent, table, and chairs.

>> CORRECT.

and I go for a walk around there to see nature.

>> Then, I go for a walk to see the nature around there.

I start cooking when sun begin to set.

>> I start cooking when the sun begins to set.

I have conversation while enjoy food and beer.

>> I have conversations while enjoying food and beer.

Finally, I like to see stars in the sky.

>> CORRECT.

I love everything about camping.

>> CORRECT.

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