What do you every winter season?why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I eat tangerine in bed every winter.
because warm bed and cool tangerine\'s combination is awsome! And I\'ll try to meet many other persons because my condition is good at winter.
강사 첨삭
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HOMEWORK QUESTION:
What do you do every winter season?why?
YOUR ANSWER:
I eat tangerine in bed every winter.
because warm bed and cool tangerine\'s combination is awsome! And I\'ll try to meet many other persons because my condition is good at winter.
because warm bed and cool tangerine\'s combination is awsome! And I\'ll try to meet many other persons because my condition is good at winter.
>>I must say that you did a very nice job and this is a nice try.
Let\'s try to correct your sentences:
>>> I eat tangerine in bed every winter. (Correct)
>>> Because warm bed and cool tangerine\'s combination is awsome! (Nice try)
You can say like this:
>> Because lying to bed while eating tangerine is awesome.
>>> And I\'ll try to meet many other persons because my condition is good at winter. (Nice Try)
You can say like this:
>>And I meet a lot of people every winter season.
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