What do you expect will be the hardest part of being a mother?
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Firstly, I think giving birth will be the hardest part because it will be so painful that some people also dies when giving birth.
Secondly, I\'m a sleepy person but I will have to stay awake every 2 hours feeding the baby.
Third, raising a child would be very tough as a working mom. I think 24 hours will be lack of time for one day.
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Secondly, I\'m a sleepy person but I will have to stay awake every 2 hours feeding the baby.
Third, raising a child would be very tough as a working mom. I think 24 hours will be lack of time for one day.
Firstly, I think giving birth will be the hardest part because it will be so painful that some people also dies when giving birth.
>> Firstly, I think giving birth will be the hardest part because it will be so painful that some women even die when giving birth.
Secondly, I\'m a sleepy person but I will have to stay awake every 2 hours feeding the baby.
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Third, raising a child would be very tough as a working mom. I think 24 hours will be lack of time for one day.
>> Third, raising a child would be very tough as a working mom. I think 24 hours won\'t be enough.
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