What do you feel when you are able to help other people?
학생이 쓴 원문
It will be very worthy if i have a chance to help someone who need it.
I also had a experiance helping other people as a volunteer member in Rotary club in the past.
It give us not only happiness in home but also confidence in social activity.
And It only needs the heart of one\'s mind, not the much money.
First trying is some more difficult, but second time will be easier than you think.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ethan!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about my question.
It\'s nice to know that you value helping others.
I agree that at first, it\'s kind of difficult but it will be easier afterwards.
The feeling of being able to help others is really good. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> It will be very worthy if I have a chance to help someone who needs it.
I also had a experiance helping other people as a volunteer member in Rotary club in the past.
I also had a experiance helping other people as a volunteer member in Rotary club in the past.
>> I also had an experience helping other people as a volunteer member in the Rotary club in the past.
It give us not only happiness in home but also confidence in social activity.
It give us not only happiness in home but also confidence in social activity.
>> It gives us not only happiness at home but also confidence in social activity.
And It only needs the heart of one\'s mind, not the much money.
And It only needs the heart of one\'s mind, not the much money.
>> And it only needs the heart of one\'s mind, not much money.
First trying is some more difficult, but second time will be easier than you think.
First trying is some more difficult, but second time will be easier than you think.
>> The first try is more difficult but the second time will be easier than you think.
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