What do you feel when you lose in a video game?
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Basically, I’m mostly fine when I lose in a video game. Every once in a while I feel upset when I lose a bet against my friends and the game is a desperate circumstance. For example those are when I play man hunt in Minecraft and Poppy playtime that is a bit horrible.
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Basically, I’m mostly fine when I lose in a video game. Every once in a
while I feel upset when I lose a bet against my friends and the game is a
desperate circumstance. For example those are when I play man hunt in
Minecraft and Poppy playtime that is a bit horrible.
>> Basically, I’m mostly fine when I lose in a video game. Every once in a
while I feel upset when I lose a bet against my friends and the game is a
desperate circumstance. For example those are when I play man hunt in
Minecraft and Poppy playtime that is a bit horrible.
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