What do you hope to achieve in 2026?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, there are three main goals I want to achieve.
First, I\'m on a diet to lose weight.
I\'ve been trying to diet, but I\'ve confirmed that my weight has increased rapidly, so I think I should try a more powerful diet. I will try to lose 5kg a month as way to control my diet and keep exercising.
Second, adapt to the workplace and maintain good relationships with people. Actually, I\'ve only been at work for a year, I think I\'ve adjusted to work, so my goal is to handle my work professionally and keep my relationships with well-made people good.
Thrid, I want to continue to share good feelings with my boyfriend.
Actually, he is my first boyfriend. I\'ve been dating for more than six months, and every day is filled with special feelings. I want to continue to share good feelings with my boyfriend so that I can continue to receive good energy because new feelings and feelings make me more special and lead me in a good way.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ji [이름]!
Thank you so much for finding time to answer your homework.
Setting goals for the new year is fantastic because it gives you focus, inspiration, and a feeling of purpose. It also helps you grow personally by transforming your dreams into workable plans.
Momentum is created by focusing on consistency rather than perfection and setting reasonable, incremental goals. This leads to notable advancements and enhanced wellbeing all year long.
Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
Well, there are three main goals I want to achieve.
>>> CORRECT
First, I\'m on a diet to lose weight.
First, I\'m on a diet to lose weight.
>>> CORRECT
I\'ve been trying to diet, but I\'ve confirmed that my weight has increased rapidly, so I think I should try a more powerful diet. I will try to lose 5kg a month as way to control my diet and keep exercising.
I\'ve been trying to diet, but I\'ve confirmed that my weight has increased rapidly, so I think I should try a more powerful diet. I will try to lose 5kg a month as way to control my diet and keep exercising.
>>> I\'ve been trying to diet, but I\'ve confirmed that my weight has increased rapidly, so I think I should try a more powerful diet. I will try to lose 5 kg. a month as a way to control my diet and keep exercising.
>>> OR: I\'ve been attempting to diet, but I\'ve seen that my weight has fast increased, so I believe I should try a more powerful diet. I\'ll strive to lose 5 kilograms a month as a means to maintain my diet and exercise.
Second, adapt to the workplace and maintain good relationships with people.>>> Second, adapt to my workplace and maintain a good relationship with people.
>>> OR: Second, I need to adjust to my new job and maintain positive interpersonal relationships.
Actually, I\'ve only been at work for a year, I think I\'ve adjusted to work, so my goal is to handle my work professionally and keep my relationships with well-made people good.
>>> Actually, I\'ve only been at work for a year. I think I\'ve adjusted at work, so my goal is to handle my work professionally and keep my relationship with well-made people good.
Thrid, I want to continue to share good feelings with my boyfriend.
Thrid, I want to continue to share good feelings with my boyfriend.
>>> Third, I want to continue sharing positive feelings with my boyfriend.
Actually, he is my first boyfriend. I\'ve been dating for more than six months, and every day is filled with special feelings. I want to continue to share good feelings with my boyfriend so that I can continue to receive good energy because new feelings and feelings make me more special and lead me in a good way.
Actually, he is my first boyfriend. I\'ve been dating for more than six months, and every day is filled with special feelings. I want to continue to share good feelings with my boyfriend so that I can continue to receive good energy because new feelings and feelings make me more special and lead me in a good way.
>>> Actually, he is my first boyfriend. I\'ve been dating him for more than six months, and every day is filled with special feelings. I want to continue to share positive feelings with my boyfriend so that I can continue to receive positive energy because new feelings make me feel more special and lead me in a good way.
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