What do you hope to have achieved by the time you're sixty?
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At first, I have enough money that I can do anything if I want.
>> Firstly, I want to have enough money to be able to do anything I want.
And I have a good reputation.
>> I also want to have a good reputation.
Everyone can likes and respects.
>> I want to be someone whom everybody likes and respects.
And the last one is that I don’t regret my life.
>> Lastly, I don\'t want to regret how I lived my life.
If I regret my life, I really feel sad even if I have a lot of money.
>> If I regret how I lived my life, I will be feeling really sad even when I have a lot of money.
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