What do you hope to have achieved by the time you're sixty?

2018-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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At first, I have enough money that I can do anything if I want. And I have a good reputation. Everyone can likes and respects. And the last one is that I don’t regret my life. If I regret my life, I really feel sad even if I have a lot of money.

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-T. Elisha

At first, I have enough money that I can do anything if I want.

>> Firstly, I want to have enough money to be able to do anything I want.
 And I have a good reputation.

>> I also want to have a good reputation.

Everyone can likes and respects.

>> I want to be someone whom everybody likes and respects.  
 And the last one is that I don’t regret my life.

>> Lastly, I don\'t want to regret how I lived my life.
 If I regret my life, I really feel sad even if I have a lot of money.

>> If I regret how I lived my life, I will be feeling really sad even when I have a lot of money.   

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