What do you imagine are the best countries in which to raise a child?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Korea is one of the best couneries to raise a child.
Because Korean education system is good and Korean parents have a lot of concern for education of their children.
So Korean children can get much education.
Also, Korea is good for security.
So we can raise our children in safe environment.
I know there are many countries having good education system like Poland, Canada etc.
If I have enough money, I maybe send my children to these contries for education.
But I wanna have a good time with my children for long time.
I think it\'s important to children having the time with parents.
강사 첨삭
Hi again Jennifer!
Thank you for your time in writing your homework :)
I think Korea is one of the best couneries to raise a child.
>>> I think Korea is one of the best countries to raise children.
Because Korean education system is good and Korean parents have a lot of concern for education of their children.
>>> Because the Korean education system is good and Korean parents are very interested in their children\'s education.
So Korean children can get much education.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, Korea is good for security.
>>> CORRECT!
So we can raise our children in safe environment.
>>> So we can raise our children in a safe environment.
I know there are many countries having good education system like Poland, Canada etc.
>>> CORRECT!
If I have enough money, I maybe send my children to these contries for education.
>>> CORRECT!
But I wanna have a good time with my children for long time.
>>> But I wanna have a good time with my children for a long time.
I think it\'s important to children having the time with parents.
>>> I think it is important for children to spend time with their parents.
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