What do you imagine makes foreigners want to live in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
The following is what foreigners say is good for living in Korea.
First, there are many different delicious foods in Korea.
Second, people are kind and friendly.
Third, there are many places to visit because the sea is on three sides and there are many moutains.
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QUESTION: What do you imagine makes foreigners want to live in your country?
The following is what foreigners say is good for living in Korea.
>>The following are what foreigners say while living in Korea.
First, there are many different delicious foods in Korea.
First, there are many different delicious foods in Korea.
>>First, there are many different delicious foods in Korea.
Second, people are kind and friendly.
Second, people are kind and friendly.
>>CORRECT!
Third, there are many places to visit because the sea is on three sides and there are many moutains.
Third, there are many places to visit because the sea is on three sides and there are many moutains.
>>Third, there are many places to visit such as the sea and mountains.
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