What do you initially do when you are feeling sick? Do you try on home remedies or do you immediatel
학생이 쓴 원문
As I said today class, I was sick after travel .
So I went to a university hospital.
Doctor said to me \"I don\'t konw the reason. I think your an immune system is a problem. So we have to inspect your blood every dawn.\" Then our family in addition to a lot of people worried about me.
After days my immune system returned to normal state and I came back to home.
Maybe I think, traveling was hard to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you for this. I hope this never happens again. Stay healthy!
- T, Beth
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>>> As I said today in class, I was sick after traveling.
So I went to a university hospital.
>>> correct
Doctor said to me \"I don\'t konw the reason. I think your an immune system is a problem. So we have to inspect your blood every dawn.\"
Doctor said to me \"I don\'t konw the reason. I think your an immune system is a problem. So we have to inspect your blood every dawn.\"
>>> The doctor told me, \"I don\'t know the exact reason. I think there\'s a problem with your immune system. So we have to inspect your blood every dawn.\"
Then our family in addition to a lot of people worried about me.
>>> Then our family, in addition to a lot of people, were worried about me.
After days my immune system returned to normal state and I came back to home.
>>> After few days, my immune system returned to its normal state and I came back home.
>>> After few days, my immune system returned to its normal state and I came back home.
Maybe I think, traveling was hard to me.
>>> I think the traveling was probably too hard for me.
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