What do you intend on doing differently this year?

2021-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I will do two different things this year!! :D Firstly, I will study harder than last year. I will concentrate more and study for looong time. Secondly, I will be good at dance!! I will practice dance for long time, beause I want to dance well!!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your concern, Jaime!!!
We need to learn everyday!!!!
Any piece of knowledge you acquire today has a value in achieving your goals in life. Continue to look for ways on how to improve our skills; it is a rewarding experience for you to see yourself speaking the English language well.
T. Jeny

I will do two different things this year!! :D
>>correct
Firstly, I will study harder than last year.
>>correct
I will concentrate more and study for looong time.
>>I will concentrate more and study for a long time.
Secondly, I will be good at dance!!
>>Secondly, I will be good at dancing!!
I will practice dance for long time, beause I want to dance well!!
>>I will practice dance for a long time because I want to dance well.

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