What do you know about Australia\'s natural wonders?
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Hmmmmmm, to be honestly, I don\'t know Australia\'s natural wonders. The funny thing is, a few minutes ago, I walked around South Brisbane park, I saw it seemed birds like turkey and when I was in coffee shop, I saw a pigeon walking around inside. So, I felt this country cherishes nature and is one with nature. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Hmmmmmm, to be honestly, I don\'t know Australia\'s natural wonders.
>> Hmmmmmm, to be honest, I don\'t know Australia\'s natural wonders.
OR >> Hmmmmmm, honestly, I don\'t know Australia\'s natural wonders.
The funny thing is, a few minutes ago, I walked around South Brisbane park, I saw it seemed birds like turkey and when I was in coffee shop, I saw a pigeon walking around inside.
>> The funny thing is, a few minutes ago, I walked around South Brisbane park, I saw something it seemed like birds similar to a turkey, and when I was in the coffee shop, I saw a pigeon walking around inside.
So, I felt this country cherishes nature and is one with nature. :)
So, I felt this country cherishes nature and is one with nature. :)
>> CORRECT!
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