What do you know about Australian culture?
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I know about Australia that was colonized from UK. And there is multicultural country like [이름]gapore. Also, it\'s called an immigration country. Kangaroos and Koalas are very famous in there. In addition to that, I know it\'s an eco-friendly country. So, I\'m really expected that I\'m going to there. When I get there, I will send a lot of pictures to you. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I know about Australia that was colonized from UK.
>> What I know about Australia is that it was colonized by the UK.
And there is multicultural country like [이름]gapore.
>> And that is a multicultural country like [이름]gapore.
Also, it\'s called an immigration country.
>> CORRECT!Kangaroos and Koalas are very famous in there.
>> CORRECT!In addition to that, I know it\'s an eco-friendly country.
>> CORRECT!So, I\'m really expected that I\'m going to there.
>> So, I\'m really expecting to go there soon.
When I get there, I will send a lot of pictures to you. :)
>> CORRECT!
(Thank you for that! :D ~ T. Camille)
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