What do you know about jewish people? It home, look it up, and write at least two interesting things
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I know about Jewish is there are belive a Judaism and they are live in Israel and U.S.
And they are so smart people.
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Here\'s your first edited assignment, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections and/or alternative phrases below.
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Jean~~
What do you know about Jewish people? If none, look it up, and write at least two interesting things.
I know about Jewish is there are belive a Judaism and they are live in Israel and U.S.
And they are so smart people.
>>> I know that Jewish people believe in Judaism, and many of them live in Israel and the United States. They are known for being intelligent and accomplished.
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