What do you know about our company?(
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I know that your company is one of the largest investment bank in Germany. Your headquarter is in Frankfurt and your have 10,000 employee worldwide based on what I read on your website. I’ve known about your company for a couple of years now because I’m interested in this industry. Your company is one of the names I think of in this industry, which is why I was excited to apply for this job when I saw it posted on your website.
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Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
What do you know about our company?
I know that your company is one of the largest investment bank in Germany.
>>> CORRECT
Your headquarter is in Frankfurt and your have 10,000 employee worldwide based on what I read on your website.
>>> CORRECT
I’ve known about your company for a couple of years now because I’m interested in this industry.
>>> CORRECT
Your company is one of the names I think of in this industry, which is why I was excited to apply for this job when I saw it posted on your website.
>>> Your company is one of the names that comes out in my mind in this industry, that is why I was excited to apply for this job when I saw it posted on your website.
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