What do you know about the history of your country?

2018-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

I was not interested in history of Korea and world when I was a student. It was the most difficult subjects for me, because I was not good at memorizing something and my teacher did not explain a story of history. He just wanted me to memorize a special event and the date of it. That's the main reason why I hated learning history. However, I deeply regret not to learn history at that time. I have been studying Korean history for couple of months and have gotten a lot of things from our ancestors. The politics and history are closely connected. If citizens in the country are not concerning about their politics, they will get disadvantages from them. I hope people in Korea have a interest in our politics and history.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

You\'ve explained it well. No matter how the advancement of technology affects our lives now, the history behind all these still makes a big impact. See you around!

~Teacher Eunice


I was not interested in history of Korea and world when I was a student.

>>> I was not interested about the history of Korea and the world when I was a student.  

It was the most difficult subjects for me, because I was not good at memorizing something and my teacher did not explain a story of history.

>>> Those were the most difficult subjects for me, because I was not good at memorizing something and my teacher did not explain the history. 

He just wanted me to memorize a special event and the date of it.

>>> Correct! 

That\'s the main reason why I hated learning history.
>>> Correct!  

However, I deeply regret not to learn history at that time. 

>>> Correct!

I have been studying Korean history for couple of months and have gotten a lot of things from our ancestors. 

>>> Correct!

The politics and history are closely connected. 

>>> Correct!

If citizens in the country are not concerning about their politics, they will get disadvantages from them.

>>> If the citizens in a country are not concern about their politics, they will get disadvantages from them.

I hope people in Korea have a interest in our politics and history.

>>> I hope people in Korea have an interest in our politics and history.  


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