What do you know about the history of your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
You\'ve explained it well. No matter how the advancement of technology affects our lives now, the history behind all these still makes a big impact. See you around!
~Teacher Eunice
I was not interested in history of Korea and world when I was a student.
>>> I was not interested about the history of Korea and the world when I was a student.
It was the most difficult subjects for me, because I was not good at memorizing something and my teacher did not explain a story of history.
>>> Those were the most difficult subjects for me, because I was not good at memorizing something and my teacher did not explain the history.
He just wanted me to memorize a special event and the date of it.
>>> Correct!
That\'s the main reason why I hated learning history.
>>> Correct!
However, I deeply regret not to learn history at that time.
>>> Correct!
I have been studying Korean history for couple of months and have gotten a lot of things from our ancestors.
>>> Correct!
The politics and history are closely connected.
>>> Correct!
If citizens in the country are not concerning about their politics, they will get disadvantages from them.
>>> If the citizens in a country are not concern about their politics, they will get disadvantages from them.
I hope people in Korea have a interest in our politics and history.
>>> I hope people in Korea have an interest in our politics and history.
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