What do you know about your country\'s food culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my country\'s food culture is well divided main food and side food for example \"bibimbap\"is main food and \"kimchi\" is side food.
I want many people know Korean food.
강사 첨삭
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What do you know about your country\'s food culture?
I think my country\'s food culture is well divided main food and side food for example \"bibimbap\"is main food and \"kimchi\" is side food.
>> I think my country\'s food culture is well divided into main food and side food, for example, \"bibimbap\" is the main food, and \"kimchi\" is the side food.
I want many people know Korean food.
>> I want many people to know Korean food.
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