What do you like about school?

2019-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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First of all, my school has clear academic tradition that stresses the humanities and global-peace. As an practice of it, the school hosted the international conference among university presidents in the past. And now, there\'s a program named Global Collaborative program that is about the topics like economic inequality, sustainable development so on. Besides the topics, the participants of this program is also global. Every lecturer of it is well known schoars who are offered a position from our school. And most of students are foreign students. Actually, our school has advantageous environments for students who major the social science if they are good at English. So I always have felt regrets about it since I\'ve avoided the situation that uses the English. But, I thought it is too good to miss, and decided to use it. Even though I\'m not good at English, I already registered the GC program. So I need to practice English more hard to utilize this opportunity well.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Remember that learning English requires action. One small action is more powerful than reading hundreds of articles. Yes, we know it is very hard to do things, even if they are good for us. 

I commend you for being so active and alert to listen and speak the language; continue that attitude because you can achieve many things in learning English.

Don\'t pull yourself down!!!!

T. Jeny



   

First of all, my school has clear academic tradition that stresses the humanities and global-peace.

>>First of all, my school had a pure academic standard that stresses humanity and global peace.

As an practice of it, the school hosted the international conference among university presidents in the past.

>>As a practice, the school hosted International conference with University presidents in the past.
And now, there\'s a program named Global Collaborative program that is about the topics like economic inequality, sustainable development so on.

>>And now, there\'s a program named Global Collaborative program about economic inequality, sustainable development and so on.

Besides the topics, the participants of this program is also global.

>>Besides from those topics, the participants are also global.

 Every lecturer of it is well known schoars who are offered a position from our school.

>>All lecturers are well-known scholars who have a good position in schools.
And most of students are foreign students.

>>And most of the students are foreign students.
 Actually, our school has advantageous environments for students who major the social science if they are good at English.

>>Actually, our school has advantageous environments for students who major social science if they are good in English.
So I always have felt regrets about it since I\'ve avoided the situation that uses the English.

>>So I always regret about it using English.
 But, I thought it is too good to miss, and decided to use it.

>>But I think, it\'s never too late so I have decided to use the English language.
 Even though I\'m not good at English, I already registered the GC program.

>>Even though I\'m not good in English, I registered in the GC program.
 So I need to practice English more hard to utilize this opportunity well.

>>So I need to practice English harder to utilize this opportunity well.


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