What do you like about staying at other people\'s house?

2019-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I don\'t want to staying over at somewhere, but I feel like something to do, sometimes on nowadays necessary. I will don’t make to sleep easily and deeply at other place, I am also able to be discomfortable of washing mybody and eatting the food. Although I think that is exciting and expecting of what to do anything. I don’t want to stay over other one’s at my house yet, because I only want to stay my house with my family, but I shoud be allow to stay over at outside myself.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! t[이름]k you for this. I agree, it is quite uncomfortable sleeping somewhere else.

- T. Beth

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I don\'t want to staying over at somewhere, 

>>> I don\'t want staying over anywhere,  

 but I feel like something to do, sometimes on nowadays necessary.

>>> But I feel like doing it sometimes or when it is necessary.    
 I will don’t make to sleep easily and deeply at other place,

>>> I won\'t be able to sleep easily or deeply at other place.   
 I am also able to be discomfortable of washing mybody and eatting the food. 

 >>> It would also be uncomfortable washing my body and eating food.   
Although I think that is exciting and expecting of what to do anything.

>>>   Although I think  it is exciting and I look forward to doing anything.
 I don’t want to stay over other one’s at my house yet, because I only want to stay my house with my family,

>>>   I don\'t want others to stay over at my house yet because I only want to stay at my place with my family. 
 but I shoud be allow to stay over at outside myself.

>>>  But I should be allowed to stay outside myself. 

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