What do you like about studying?

2021-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to do well in English so that I like to meet a lot of people

강사 첨삭

Hi,[이름] [이름]!

Good afternoon!
Thank you for sharing your answer. I just changed \'so that\' to \'because\'.

Use \'so that\' when referring to the result of an action while use \'because\' when referring to the reason. 
I also added a sentence using \'so that\' in order for you to check the difference. ^^

Have a nice day! ^^

~Teacher Gina

I want to do well in English so that I like to meet a lot of people.
>> I want to do well in English because I like to meet a lot of people.
>> Or: I want to do well in English so that I will meet a lot of people. 

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