What do you like about your age now?

2017-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Thesedays I have reserve from the budget by getting satisfing jobs. SO, My favorable thing is buying expensive clothes Within my my budget. And I dream the happier future for my life. To be specific, In the near future I will promote as a manager in the company at that time It make me to save more money than now. and I Sometimes imagine that How wonderful get a marry ? when i was in a university I just focused on the study because of getting good jobs. buy Nowdays It is the most diffrence that I Have a postive [이름]d for the future rather than the afraid.

강사 첨삭



Hello JM,

Growing and developing yourself could be as simple as learning one new thing a day.

One step at a time.^^

Small learning develops into massive learning over time.^^

Have a nice day!!!

T. Jeny


Thesedays I have reserve from the budget by getting satisfing jobs.

>>These days, I get enough budget from my satisfying job.

SO, My favorable thing is buying expensive clothes Within my my budget.

>>So, my favorite thing is buying expensive clothes within my budget.
 And I dream the happier future for my life. 

>>And I dream of a happier future. 
To be specific, In the near future I will promote as a manager in the company at that time It make me to save more money than now. 

>>To be specific, I will promotes as a manager in the company in the future. It will help me make more money and save more.
 and I Sometimes imagine that How wonderful get a marry ? 

>>And I sometimes imagine having a wonderful marriage.
 when i was in a university I just focused on the study because of getting good jobs. 

>>When I was in university, I just focused on studying to get a good job.
 buy Nowdays It is the most diffrence that I Have a postive [이름]d for the future rather than the afraid.

>>But it is different nowadays, we need to have a positive [이름]d for the future rather than thinking about failure.

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