What do you like about your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love developed and traditional city because Korea is something special.
Special things are developed and there are many natural environments and four seasons.
강사 첨삭
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What do you like about your country?
I love developed and traditional city because Korea is something special.
>> Korea is something special because it has both developed and traditional cities, which I love.
Special things are developed and there are many natural environments and four seasons.
>> Special things are developed, there\'s a lot of nature, and we have four seasons.
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