What do you like about your home?

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I like to feel warm from my family at home.

>> I like to feel the warm from my family at home.
First of the reasons is, we can spend time while taling together.

>> The first reason is, we can spend time while talking together.

My family usually talk all together the time when we eat breakfast and supper. 

>> My family usually talks when we eat breakfast and supper. 

At that time, I believe we can form consensus off the record and a sense of belonging.

>> At that time, I believe we can form consensus off the record and create a sense of belonging.
Second of the reasons is, I like to eat food that my mother cook.

>> The second reason is, I like to eat foods that my mother cooks.

When I cooked and ate alone during staying rented room, I felt lonely and empty.

>> When I cooked and ate alone at the room which I rent, I felt lonely and empty.

My mother\'s food can also make me feel warm. 

>> My mother\'s food can also makes me feel warm. 
Finally, they cheer me up whenever I have some problems.

>> Correct.

In my experience, I was really stressful when I prepared exam to apply university.

>> In my experience, I was really stressed out when I prepared for the university entrance exam.

My mother gave me some fruits and snacks while I was studying, and my father talk with me and gave me some solutions to resolve my problems, which cheered me up.

>> My mother gave me some fruits and snacks while I was studying, and my father talked with me and gave me some solutions to resolve my problems, which cheered me up.
In summary, I want to keep this feeling and appreciate it to my family.

>> In summary, I want to keep this feeling and appreciate my family.