what do you like about your home?what don\'t you like?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like my home\'s colorfule colors.
For example, it is white door,yellow wallpaper,could shape\'s blue wallpaper and rainbow flowers ets.
my home don\'t sound inslation so, I don\'t like it
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! It looks like you have a very pretty house. See you on Monday! ~T. Elisha
I like my home\'s colorfule colors.
>> I like my home\'s colorful walls.
For example, it is white door,yellow wallpaper,could shape\'s blue wallpaper and rainbow flowers ets.
>> For example, we have white doors, yellow and blue wallpapers, rainbow flowers and many more.
my home don\'t sound inslation so, I don\'t like it
>> My house isn\'t soundproof, I don\'t like that fact.
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