What do you like about your hometown?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was born and grew up in Jeju Island.
It\'s located southern of South Korea.
There are lots of beautiful beaches and volcanic landscapes.
The weather is mild even in winter.
Natural environments make people comfortable.
I feel emotionally intimate, so I like my home town.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Be careful of the vocabulary words that you choose.
Make sure they are suitable for the situation you want to portray.
Thank you for always trying hard.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I was born and grew up in Jeju Island.
>> I was born and grew up on Jeju Island.
It\'s located southern of South Korea.
It\'s located southern of South Korea.
>> It is located in the southern part of South Korea.
There are lots of beautiful beaches and volcanic landscapes.
There are lots of beautiful beaches and volcanic landscapes.
>> Correct
The weather is mild even in winter.
The weather is mild even in winter.
>> Correct
Natural environments make people comfortable.
Natural environments make people comfortable.
>> The natural environment makes people feel comfortable.
I feel emotionally intimate, so I like my home town.
I feel emotionally intimate, so I like my home town.
>> I feel emotionally connected to it, so I like my hometown.
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