What do you like and dislike about mornings?
학생이 쓴 원문
TO. Ms. [Name]✨
Hi! I hope you\'re energetic enough to read my letter or paragraph. What I like about mornings are that I can\'t remember all the bad thing that happened the day\'s yesterday. But except for that, I don\'t have anything good when it\'s morningtime. I do love our class but I\'m always too tired to do the class properly. Sorry😥. What I do not like about mornings are clumsy me, waking up all late, a sad and frusterated Mum, scolding me furiously, and all that frenzy happens when Dad is cheerfully snoring away. I am so tired now... I promise you I\'ll be cheery next day. Again, I\'m sorry. Goodbye!🎈
2022-10-4 (Tuesday)
Love, Heather🎨
강사 첨삭
Hello Heather! It\'s nice to hear that you don\'t give much attention to the negative things that is happening around you. Stay positive! I\'ll see you in class. ~T. Lyn
Hi! I hope you\'re energetic enough to read my letter or paragraph.
>>Correct.
What I like about mornings are that I can\'t remember all the bad thing that happened the day\'s yesterday.
>>What I like about the morning is that I can\'t remember all the bad things that happened yesterday.
But except for that, I don\'t have anything good when it\'s morningtime.
>>But other than that, there\'s nothing good about it in the morning.
I do love our class but I\'m always too tired to do the class properly.
>>I love our class but I\'m always too tired to participate properly.
Sorry😥.
>>I\'m sorry.
What I do not like about mornings are clumsy me, waking up all late, a sad and frusterated Mum, scolding me furiously, and all that frenzy happens when Dad is cheerfully snoring away.
>>Things I don\'t like in the morning are the following: I tend to be clumsy, wake up too late, the sad and frustrated mom, the scolding, and all the frenzy that happens when my dad snores cheerfully.
I am so tired now...
>>I\'m exhausted now.
I promise you I\'ll be cheery next day.
>>I promise to spend the next day energetically as well.
Again, I\'m sorry.
>>Correct.
Goodbye!
>>Correct.
Love, Heather
>>Love, Heather!
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