What do you like and dislike about the capital city of your country?1
학생이 쓴 원문
[이름]ul,where I live in is the capital city of Korea. It\'s a unique city and everything is going fast. I\'ll describe the pros and cons of this city.
First, the public transport system is well-designed. There are lots of subway lines and bus stops and they are located in the proper place so most people use it to commute. You can go everywhere by subway or bus. However, It\'s crowded during rush hour. Especially line number 2 which is an inner circular line and has a lot of transfer station is mainly crowded. Second, various cultural infrastructures including theatre, concert hall and museum are located in [이름]ul. You can enjoy those kinds of cultural contents at reasonable prices. Third, a river called \'Han gang\' is crossed [이름]ul east to west so around the riverside parks have been built. When the weather is breezy and warm, people enjoy a picnic with chicken and beer. Riding a \'Dda reoung ie\' is one of the common leisure for people.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
It\'s a unique city and everything is going fast.
>>It\'s a unique city where everything moves fast.
I\'ll describe the pros and cons of this city.
>>CORRECT!
First, the public transport system is well-designed.
First, the public transport system is well-designed.
>>CORRECT!
There are lots of subway lines and bus stops and they are located in the proper place so most people use it to commute.
>>CORRECT!
You can go everywhere by subway or bus.
>>CORRECT!
However, It\'s crowded during rush hour.
>>CORRECT!
Especially line number 2 which is an inner circular line and has a lot of transfer station is mainly crowded.
>>Line number 2 which is especially crowded, is an inner circular line and has a lot of transfer stations and is mainly crowded.
Second, various cultural infrastructures including theater, concert hall and museum are located in [이름]ul.
>>CORRECT!
You can enjoy those kinds of cultural contents at reasonable prices.
>>CORRECT!
Third, a river called \'Han gang\' is crossed [이름]ul east to west so around the riverside parks have been built.
>>Third, a river called \'Han gang\' crosses [이름]ul from east to west. So, around the riverside parks have been built.
When the weather is breezy and warm, people enjoy a picnic with chicken and beer.
>>CORRECT!
Riding a \'Dda reoung ie\' is one of the common leisure for people.
>>CORRECT!
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