What do you like and dislike about the capital city of your country?2
학생이 쓴 원문
\'Dda reoung ie\' means the sound when a bicycle\'s bell is ringing in Koren. [이름]ul also provides a bicycle rental service to people as well. All we need to do is download the app and register the payment. It\'s easy to borrow and comfort to return. To cover the dynamic spectrum of people [이름]ul is trying to preserve detailed service to the citizen.
On the other hand, It\'s one of the populated cities in the world so It can\'t avoid the problem of real estate and residential environment. The price of a real estate is getting higher and young people are suffering from a residential problem. These days [이름]ul has conducted a redevelopment project in underdevelopment area. But It\'s uncertain that those projects successfully helped people. I hope those problems are solved so I can buy a house at [이름]ul when I reach in my 40s !
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for sending your interesting compositions as usual. See you tomorrow! I\'ll start working from home tomorrow ^^
~~Teacher KAte
>>\'Dda reoung ie\' means the sound of a bicycle\'s bell ringing in Korea.
[이름]ul also provides a bicycle rental service to people as well.
>>CORRECT!
All we need to do is download the app and register the payment. It\'s easy to borrow and comfort to return.
>>All we need to do is download the app and register the payment. It\'s easy to borrow and returning it is comfortable.
To cover the dynamic spectrum of people [이름]ul is trying to preserve detailed service to the citizen.
>>To cover the dynamic spectrum of people, [이름]ul is trying to preserve it\'s quality service to the citizens.
On the other hand, It\'s one of the populated cities in the world so It can\'t avoid the problem of real estate and residential environment.
On the other hand, It\'s one of the populated cities in the world so It can\'t avoid the problem of real estate and residential environment.
>>CORRECT!
The price of a real estate is getting higher and young people are suffering from a residential problem.
>>The price of real estate properties is getting higher and young people are suffering from housing problems.
These days [이름]ul has conducted a redevelopment project in underdevelopment area.
>>These days [이름]ul has conducted a redevelopment project in the underdeveloped areas.
But It\'s uncertain that those projects successfully helped people.
>>But It\'s uncertain whether those projects successfully helped people.
I hope those problems are solved so I can buy a house at [이름]ul when I reach in my 40s !
>>I hope those problems are solved so I can buy a house in [이름]ul when I reach my 40s!
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