What do you like best about business trips?
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The best business trips is go to the Seoul for getting education something.
Because getting an education is more easier working in a company.
In general, we stay a 2-3days for education. And our company pays a hotel fee and lunch.
I love to drink coffee in a cafe, So i always go to the populary cafe near by my hotel after education.
Yesterday I just planed what i will do next year using my laptop.
Listening cafe music was helps me deep thinking.
My 2026 goal is studying English and getting a certificate.
When we talked in Enlgish, I feel very nervous. But next year this time, I hope that not feeling nervous. And I hope your korean to.
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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
The best business trips is go to the Seoul for getting education something.
>> One of the best business trips is going to Seoul to learn something, like skills.
Because getting an education is more easier working in a company.
>> It\'s because getting an training is way easier than working in a company.
In general, we stay there for 2-3days for education.
>> In general, we stay there for 2-3days for the training.
And our company pays a hotel fee and lunch.
>> And, our company pays for our food and accommodation.
I love to drink coffee in a cafe, So i always go to the populary cafe near by my hotel after education.
>> I love to drink coffee in a cafe, so I always go to a popular cafe near my hotel after the training.
Yesterday, I just planed what I will do next year using my laptop.
>> CORRECT!
Listening cafe music was helps me deep thinking.
>> Listening to music in the cafe helps me think deeply.
My 2026 goal is studying English and getting a certificate.
>> CORRECT!
When we talked in Enlgish, I feel very nervous. >> When we talked in English, I felt very nervous.
But next year this time, I hope that not feeling nervous.
>> But hopefully next year, at that time, I hope that I won\'t feel nervous.
And I hope your korean to.
>> I also hope the same thing for you in studying Korean.
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