What do you like best about staying at home?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best about staying at home is I can do anything at home. For example, I can study, play the piano, listen to music, eat my favorite food and so on. And I don\'t like to go out it\'s because the outside is very noisy and makes me tired. So staying at home is very good to me.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Daisy! ^_^
I agree that it\'s really nice to stay at home. I love staying at home too. I am an introvert by nature and a home buddy through and through.
However, my mom says I should also go out sometimes because staying at home all the time makes me an unsociable person.
I agree that it\'s really nice to stay at home. I love staying at home too. I am an introvert by nature and a home buddy through and through.
However, my mom says I should also go out sometimes because staying at home all the time makes me an unsociable person.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you in class later. ^_^
~Teacher Charry
See you in class later. ^_^
~Teacher Charry
>> I think the best thing about staying at home is, I can do anything at home.
For example, I can study, play the piano, listen to music, eat my favorite food and so on.
>> CORRECT!
And I don\'t like to go out it\'s because the outside is very noisy and makes me tired.
>> In addition, I don\'t like to go outside because it is very noisy and it makes me feel tired.
So staying at home is very good to me.
>> CORRECT!
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