What do you like best about your country\'s culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe a community is the best culture in my country. Korean tend to do whatever it is together like work, having a dining, and playing hobby. It could make us closer with each other. But if it\'s too much, you can feel like you\'re interfering.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I believe a community is the best culture in my country.
>> CORRECT!Korean tend to do whatever it is together like work, having a dining, and playing hobby.
>> Koreans tend to do whatever it is together like work, having a dining, and playing hobby.
It could make us closer with each other.
>> It could make us closer to each other.
But if it\'s too much, you can feel like you\'re interfering.
>> CORRECT!
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