What do you like best about your sibling?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like games, P.E and board games.
First, I like games very very very very.
Second, P.E is my favorite school classes.
Lastly, board games are I very very very very verylike board games,
for example, I like chess very very very much.
These are the my favorite things about my sibling.
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I like games, P.E, and board games.
>> CORRECT!
First, I like games very very very very.
First, I like games very very very very.
>> First, I like games very much.
Second, P.E is my favorite school classes.
>> Second, P.E is my favorite school class.
Lastly, board games are I very very very very verylike board games,
>> Lastly, I like board games very much.
for example, I like chess very very very much.
>> For example, I really like chess.
These are the my favorite things about my sibling.
>> These are my favorite things that I do with my sibling.
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