What do you like buying in a convenience store? Why?
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I like to buy ramen in convenience store because I like spicy food.
My favorite ramen is Korean Spicy Noodle(불닭볶음면).
It\'s so spicy but I like it. I also like to buy drinks.
There are Power Ade, Power O2, and 2%!!😀
I like convenience store food, but I like home-cooked meal more!!!!
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What do you like buying in a convenience store? Why?
I like to buy ramen in convenience store because I like spicy food.
>>> I like to buy ramen in convenience stores because I like spicy food.
My favorite ramen is Korean Spicy Noodle(불닭볶음면).
>>> CORRECT
It\'s so spicy but I like it. I also like to buy drinks.
>>> CORRECT
OR: It is so spicy but I like it and I also like to buy different kinds of drinks.
There are Power Ade, Power O2, and 2%!!😀
>>> There are Power Ade, Power O2, and etc.
I like convenience store food, but I like home-cooked meal more!!!!
>>> I like foods in convenience stores, but I like home-cooked meals more!
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