What do you like doing during winter?
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I like to do many things during winter season such as grilling sweet potato, going with ski, making a snow man, and lying on the bed with heating pad. When I was younger, I prefered summer to winter. But not anymore, [이름]ce global warming started, summer has been terrible by now. That\'s why people like to winter, and I love to see white Christmas with only girlfriend. When it snows on Christmas, it\'s called White Christmas. I\'ve seen it only 3 times for my life.
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I like to do many things during winter season such as grilling sweet potato, going with ski, making a snow man, and lying on the bed with heating pad.
>>> I like to do many things during the winter season, such as grilling sweet potatoes, going skiing, making a snowman, and lying on the bed with a heating pad.
When I was younger, I prefered summer to winter.
>>> When I was younger, I preferred summer to winter.
But not anymore, [이름]ce global warming started, summer has been terrible by now.
>>> But not anymore; [이름]ce global warming started, summer has been terrible by now.
That\'s why people like to winter, and I love to see white Christmas with only girlfriend.
>>> CORRECT.
When it snows on Christmas, it\'s called White Christmas.
>>> CORRECT.
I\'ve seen it only 3 times for my life.
>>> I\'ve seen it only three times in my life.
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