What do you like doing with your childhood friends whenever you get together? How often can you get

2023-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I like playing the soccer with my friends. and we get together twice a year in my hometown. This gathering is good motivate in my life.

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Good morning, [이름]! Thank you so much for being such a great student in our class at all times. I am grateful for your hard work and willingness to particiate actively in the lesson. Anyway, we will just keep on having more discussion again in our lesson. ~ T. Marie ^^ 
I like playing the soccer with my friends.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
and we get together twice a year in my hometown.
>> We get together twice a year in my hometown. 
This gathering is good motivate in my life.
>> This gathering is good to motivate me in life. 

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