What do you like doing with your friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like playing badminton with my freinds, and I like playing volleyball too!
And I like drawing with my freinds.
Exsept, I like play everything with my freinds!!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Da [이름]! ^^ Thank you for writing your essay! Keep expressing yourself okay? See you tomorrow!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I like playing badminton with my friends, and I like playing volleyball too!
>>> CORRECT~! ^^
And I like drawing with my friends.
>>> CORRECT~! ^^
Exsept, I like play everything with my freinds!!
And I like drawing with my friends.
>>> CORRECT~! ^^
Exsept, I like play everything with my freinds!!
>>> I like play everything with my friends!!
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