What do you like/hate most about school reunions?

2021-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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1. What do you like/hate most about school reunions? I like talking about our memories of old times that we had good and bad things each other, but I hate getting wasted and having a blackout at school reunions. 2. what activities do you think are suitable for school reunions? I think we have to help the host to keep going well our school reunion. So many participant will satisfy the reunion. that`s one of our suitable activity.

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Thank you for this Sir Hyuji!

1. What do you like/hate most about school reunions?
I like talking about our memories of old times that we had good and bad things each other, but I hate getting wasted and having a blackout at school reunions.
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I like talking about our old time memories of good and bad things with each other, but I hate getting wasted and having a blackout at school reunions. 
2. what activities do you think are suitable for school reunions?
I think we have to help the host to keep going well our school reunion. So many participant will satisfy the reunion. 
>>> I think we have to help the host to continue with our school reunion so many participants will be satisfied with the reunion. 
 that`s one of our suitable activity.
>>> That is one of our necessary activities.

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