What do you like least about your culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
We haver a culture to ask age when we meet someone first in Korea.
If I am young thant someone, I would be more polite.
Wherever I go and whenever I neet new people, I should let them know my age.
This culture make people attach their ages and People can\'t freely exchange their thought eack other.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
If I am young thant someone, I would be more polite.
Wherever I go and whenever I meet new people, I should let them know my age.
This culture make people attach their ages and People can\'t freely exchange their thought eack other.
We haver a culture to ask age when we meet someone first in Korea.
>>We have a culture to ask the age when we meet someone first in Korea.
If I am young thant someone, I would be more polite.
>>If I am younger than someone, I would be more polite.
Wherever I go and whenever I meet new people, I should let them know my age.
>>CORRECT
This culture make people attach their ages and People can\'t freely exchange their thought eack other.
>>This culture make people put a lot of attachment on their ages and people can\'t freely exchange their thought with each other.
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